Saturday, May 1, 2010

Watching

Sun always watches from afar:
watches flowers burst into vibrant colors,
watches the slow, inevitable changing of seasons,
watches the heinous deeds of humanity
performed with false certainty of privacy.

Sun watches everything, knows everything,
except for the existence of Moon,
who watches Sun,
from the protective shadow
of her brother Earth.
Sun is too caught up in watching
to notice he is being watched.


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Notes: So, the first prompt on The Journal is "Write an Anaphora poem. An Anaphora is 'the repetition of a word or expression several times within a clause or within a paragraph.' In poetry the repetition of the phrase can be just at the beginning of each line, setting the tone as a meditation or a mantra, or it can be utilized more subtlety within the poem. The poem can be free verse or prose style." I decided that I'm going to go in order so that I don't accidentally miss one. The word I chose to repeat was "watch."

2 comments:

  1. I like the layers of who is watching whom and who is aware in this poem. Nicely done.

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