I remember you were a golden sun
with eyes that glistened bright like morning rain.
You were as wild as raging rivers run
once just as sweet and just as free of pain.
once just as sweet and just as free of pain.
I remember I looked to you,
as adventurous sailors seek the stars
forever lost upon the ocean blue
or sitting drunk in weary seaside bars.
forever lost upon the ocean blue
or sitting drunk in weary seaside bars.
Now you have fallen, without any grace,
like a great bird with broken battered wings.
Your terrible, bloody, deceitful, face
now shows the plain and awful truth of things:
if you had really flown so very high,
like a great bird with broken battered wings.
Your terrible, bloody, deceitful, face
now shows the plain and awful truth of things:
if you had really flown so very high,
the fall would certainly have made you die.
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Notes: So, I wrote this sonnet a couple months ago. When I saw the today's NaPoWriMo prompt, I dug it up so that I could post it, because it suits the prompt perfectly. That being said, I did write a new hero poem (see below).
Michelle--Beautifully written, and a wonderful/powerful ending!
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ReplyDeleteWow..... What an amazing poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you PJ! ;)
ReplyDeleteThe title is wonderful.
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